Audience feedback

In order for us to gain essential audience feedback, we presented our music video to a variety of people, they then answered "what did you think of the production" on a sheet of paper where the audience were able to give personal positive and negative views of the music video. From the results we were extremely thankful for all given points as it allowed us to see any improvement for our production.

After showing our music video to our audience, we asked them for feedback on what worked well in the video and if anything could be improved.

POSITIVE
"Fluent narrative, worked well with the lyrics and was a clear image of a relationship"

"ancillary texts linked well throughout, you could cleary see it was all linked to the same artist...very professional"

"very well conformed to conventions of the RnB genre presented by other music videos"

"Great narrative and use of editing to create flashbacks"

"very realistic and relatable narrative, love the challanging of genders"

NEGATIVE

"would have been more cohessive if same font for 'Cincere's name' wasused for the song title on the ancillary texts"

" could present more of a pop genre"

"would like to see a little more of the artist singing on his own"

Our final R&B music video

Script

Cincere- Find my way home

Dominic:Another show

back on the road
destination too far away

from coast to coast

thats where i must go

but still there is something missing

chorus

at times i feel like im not worth your time

cause im not around enough

trying to chase this paper to keep you happy

(while im gone)

ive got to find my way home

i oh i

i need my baby in my life

cause im missing you like hell

lately its driving me crazy

so heres what il do

ive got to find my way home

oh oh ive got to find my way home

i know you get tired of waiting and dissipating
(im not coming home to you)

but if it makes you feel better its hard for me to sleep at night with out you

chorus

at times i feel like im not worth your time

cause im not around enough

trying to chase this paper to keep you happy

(while im gone)

ive got to find my way home

i oh i

i need my baby in my life

cause im missing you like hell

lately its driving me crazy

so heres what il do

ive got to find my way home

ive got to find my way home

i oh i

i need my baby in my life

cause im missing you like hell

laterly its driving me crazy

so heres what il do

ive got to find my way home

ive got to find my way home

Chorus

sometimes i feel like im not worth your time

cause im not around enough

trying to chase this paper to keep you happy

(while im gone)

ive got to find my way home

i oh i

i need my baby in my life

cause im missing you like hell

laterly its driving me crazy

so heres what il do

ive got to find my way home

ive got to find my way home

Shooting Schedule

In order to complete our final product we created a shooting schedule in order to be able to film all the scenes we needed for our music video. The shooting schedule worked most effectively as it allowed us as a group to be more organised and therefore complete all the narrative in order to portray our artist through our finished R&B music video

Day 1
INT:Field scene
Date: 23.11.10
Time: 3:00
Costume: Dark clothing, hat, scurf, gloves (natural)
Props:
Starring: Dominic (main male artist)

Scenes

• Dominic singing my tree (medium close ups, long shots)
• Miming words my tree, in middle of field (extreme close ups, medium shots)
  
• Dominic sitting down on the wall singing (extreme close ups, medium shots)
• First and second verse focussing on

Day 2
INT:Feild scene
Date: 25.11.10
Time:1:45
Costume: dark clothing for both male and female
female wearing heels, hair down
Props: mobile phone, teddy bear, black bin bag
Starring: Dominic (main male artist) and Sophie (female character)

Scenes

• Choruses filmed and Dominic miming to the words looking into camera (medium close ups, extreme close ups)
• Dominic walking with hands in pocket away from camera (long shot, pan, tracking shot)
• Dominic walking towards camera (long shot)
• Dominic looking lonely kicking snow (long shot)

Day 3
INT:House scene
Date: 27.11.10
Time:3:00
Costume: Dark clothing, hat, scurf, gloves (natural)
Props:
Starring: Dominic (main male artist)

Scenes

• Both Dominic and Sophie located in lounge:talking (Medium shots, close ups)
• Dominics phone rings (extreme close up)
• Sophie stands up, they argue (medium shot, pan)
• Sophie walks out of room, Dominic follows (tracking shot)
• They both walk up stairs (tracking shot)
• Sophie walks into bedroom, with Dominic following (tracking shot)
  
• Sophie in bedroom putting teddy bear in black bin bag (medium shot, close up)
• Sophie walks out of bedroom (tracking shot, medium close up)
• Throws bag out of window (long shot of bag falling out window)
  
• walking down stairs (pan, medium shot)
  
  

Day 4
INT:House scene
Date: 29.11.10
Time:2:00
Costume: Dark clothing, hat, scurf, gloves (natural)
Props:
Starring: Dominic (main male artist)

• Continuation of narrative scene- cincere (Dominic) living the house
• Singing chorus (pan shot, long shot)

Planning Stage 2

As a group we came up with final ideas for what to include in our R&B music video. We created a multi media presentation in order to present our ideas to the class. Such elements we included were:

• Costume
• Props
• Locations
• Camera shots and angles
• Our target demographic
• Narrative aspects
• Theory to use

In order to help us complete our music video, the contents of the power point will guide us through creating our music video by allowing us to add in micro elements that will help our music video appeal to the target audience and portray the genre.

We also created questionnaires that allowed us to research the R&B genre which gave us a structure for a R&B video and what elements we were to include the representations in our genre we chose.

Story Board

In order to create our music video to our best abilities enabling the narrative to be portrayed most effectively and professionally, we created a story board enabling all the elements of the R&B genre so that it caters to all the expectations of the target demographic and our ideas to be included in our music video.

Story Board which we used for our final production:

Planning Stage

This is our evaluation of Cincere's Music video. With in the evaluation we included many points such as:

1. whether to challenge or conform to the codes and conventions of our chosen genre
2. Whether to include elements that would typically be included in an R&B genre music video
3. Do our ancillary texts present a continuously linked promottional pack (Digi-pack)
4. Our audience feed back comment

By creating an evaluation of our music video it allowed us to bring together all our final decisions in order for them to make a clear conclusion.